Sunday, November 8, 2020

The Darkness Over The Water

Introduction
This story came from an idea thought of based on the history of a small island off the shoreline of Leelanau county Michigan. This will have elements of mystery and elements of horror but like many other stories it is deeply rooted in history. There was no crime on the island aside from some vandalism in the 1950s. I was working a job delivering building materials and one of the orders took us to a house in Northport where the island, now called Gull Island due to the overwhelming population of seagulls. After looking for information on why the chimney stacks still were there I found out that the island had been bought by a wealthy Michigan resident. He then went on to build an expansive vacation home for his family there. After the original owner died his son inherited it and the home was left empty for many years. It was in these years that some local teens from Northport went to the island and vandalized the home. There is where its crumbling remains remained.
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When the sun came up over the island that brisk morning in mid-October no one had any knowledge of what evil had come in the night. The sun was bright and life continued as it had for years. As the sun came through the large window the red on the wall looked like a piece found in a gallery. The house was built on the top of the only hill so no one could see the vicious macabre art framed by the window. It was almost Halloween before anyone laid eyes on this, by then the bright red had become a dull brown and the flies had arrived. When the phone rang at the small island police station it was the neighbors at the bottom of the hill. They had not seen or heard from ____ in nearly two weeks. The neighbors inquired about checking on the ___ to clarify that they were alright. Detective ___ said he would check on them as he was heading that way.
 When he arrived and looked at the long dark house he had no idea what he was walking into. The darkness that had touched this family was still looking in the shadows and in the lifeless eyes of its victims. When the detective got out of his car he knew something was of. All wrong. When the detective entered the large house the buzz of the fly’s wings was almost overwhelming. He could smell evil in the air, almost taste it. He walked around the expansive house that spread almost an acre. There was no sign of activity aside from evidence of wild animals in the garden. As he got closer to the house he could see the door was slightly open His instincts kick in and he drew his gun. He reached for the door and the smell that met him knocked him back. The horror behind the door brought tears to his eyes as it slowly swung open.
He saw the walls first, covered in blood. This once bright red fluid that carried life was now a dull sticky brown plastered to every surface in sight. He came around the corner he saw the first body, a young girl. Based on her clothing she looked about 17. The face of the girl was almost completely unrecognizable; it was ripped in half as if the flesh had been just an unwanted sheet of paper. Her arms were nowhere near her body. The shoulder joint looked as if a wild animal had torn it out. Flesh and tendons hung from the open wound in to the dried blood. The blood underneath looked like a brown puddle with dull white string going through it. His gaze moved toward her feet and saw one was missing. The difference between this and the other wounds was that this was a clean separation, surgical even. The victim looked as if she had been alive while her attacker was mutilating her. The final strike had nearly severed her head.
Detective ____ continued to move through the house and into the kitchen. Here he saw the next victim, another female. She looked like she could be the girl’s mother. She was slumped in a chair her hands were bound to it and several of her fingers were missing. The first thought he had was that she was put here to watch the evil destroy what she held so dear. He thought for a brief moment that she was still breathing. He then realized it was the rise and fall of his own breathing. He walked around the chair she was in to look behind her; now he could see what had taken her life. The bullet had entered right behind her left ear. He looked closer for an exit wound and saw it under her long hair on the upper right side of her skull, the brown sticky substance that was once her life source had blended in to her hair. This made it especially hard to see in the dimly lit room with only the single beam of his flashlight to illuminate. He immediately pointed his flashlight up searching for the bullet.
______ had acclimated to the smell and the feeling of immediate repulsion from the flies and rot had gone away. His mind clear and aware of what he was facing in this darkness he made his way down the stairs to the basement through the door in the kitchen. Light held high and gun ready he walked down the stairs slowly and they creaked like they hadn’t been walked on in years. As he reached the bottom he saw one light far in the corner as soon as he saw it his gun went up without a thought. Slowly he moved closer the light through the empty basement. A chill ran through him as he pushed the door open. The sight that met him was so horrifying that he immediately became ill and tears welled in his eyes. “What kind of monster was here? Who could do such evil?” he thought to himself. The door swung open and there inside were two boys. They looked between sixteen and eighteen years old. They were tied together at the hands. The bruising on what seemed to be the older one was very clear. The other boy had almost none. What the detective notice was that one of the boys seemed twisted and sat somewhat unnaturally, while the other had near perfect posture. The contrast was odd looking. He moved his flashlight around the first body examining the wounds. There were several deep cuts in both his arms, through the muscle. Fingers, eight to be exact were missing and they weren’t anywhere in the room either. Kneecaps had been severed exposing bone and muscle.

Saturday, August 1, 2020

An update on my journey

In 2014-15 I started chasing a shadow. I have read reports and blog posts. Read about others (namely Michelle McNamara and Billy Jensen) working on cold cases. I did it on my own time just watching and waiting out of fear of being misunderstood. With all that said. I am trying to find out who took Kelly Hurlbert's life.
Two years ago I took all my notes and my amassed knowledge of crime and wrote out what I thought about the case, but only shared it with family.
One year ago I posted it on Facebook...

I got an overwhelming response from locals on my post. Friends of Kelly, people that want answers. I decided to post every few months, if only to keep it in the forefront of people's minds. I was told to reach out to her mother, Michelle. So I did. I have spoken with Michelle quite a bit over the last year. Giving her things to ask the detectives.
I also connected with a lady that works for a local radio station who has some insight to Kelly's family. She suggested I talk to Paul, Kelly's husband. After some thought I asked Michelle and she adamantly said "no". She had also told me that she was going to work on getting me access to the case file.
Fast forward to about a week or so ago. I posted again as it was the 7th anniversary on the 5th. I made some edits and additions to the one I usually post and put it on Facebook and the local subreddit. Out of nowhere there was a comment on my post "Kelly 2020", the user "laup2020"

On Tuesday 7/28 I spoke to Michelle on the phone about some things I had read. Asked her if she was opposed to me asking questions about the case downtown. She informed me that she has mentioned my desire to help to the FBI. I asked if she thought Paul would be willing to talk as I had found out he was back in town. When I asked Michelle about Paul on Tuesday, she said she would mention me to him.
There was some other talk about the case and Kelly as a person. Then this comment on my reddit post. The other comment he made gave him away. "The bike was green". So I messaged him and waited.
Around 1pm on 7/31 he messaged back.
He said he thinks my intentions are good, but doesn't want to be involved. And some other minor things.
So now I have Kelly's husband and moms blessing to push.

Shit got really real today! 7/31/20

The end. ?

The plan currently
I am going to start asking about a few leads and tips I've gotten and see where they lead me. I'm working on getting a team of sorts together to work on this.


And hopefully I will get access to the case file in there somewhere

Wednesday, May 6, 2020

The Hike

My mother used to tell me “you can always start a story with ‘It was a dark and stormy night”.  Ironically, the story I am about to tell you does not start in the dark, or in a storm, or at night for that matter. My story begins on a sunny day in the quiet, breezy woods that have become the home of legends.

I loved hiking, it didn’t matter where, but on this particular day my wife and I were exploring the woods of northern Michigan. The sun was shining, there was a light breeze and it was just me and her doing one of our favorite past times together. We had woken up that day knowing that hiking was all we were going to do that day; our only goal was to cover as much area as we possibly could. We ate a hearty breakfast of eggs, bacon and toast, another favorite of ours. After breakfast we packed our bag with sandwiches and snacks and a few water bottles and were on the trail by 10 am.

As we trekked deeper into the woods, we came to a river, it was clear and the sun shining through the trees made the water gleam. This river went for a very long distance and we decided that following it was the best decision as there was no telling where we would complete our journey. By doing so we had a guide to lead us back out as well as preventing us from getting lost. We came to steep hill around 1 pm, the sun was high and warm coming through the trees, making the walk up difficult. When we reached the top we could see for miles and decided it was a good place for a rest. Just before sitting down to rest I felt a chill and looked around, it was a strange feeling, but I ignored it. Laying out a blanket we ate our lunch and just took our time soaking up the sun and feeling the little bit of breeze there was. After we finished we continued to follow the river deeper into the woods, knowing there were many secrets hidden under the vast canopy.

The river trickled quietly next to us as we walked in the patches of sunlight that breached the trees. We had been walking for almost two hours when I saw a large tree at the edge of the river that reminded me of the place I had proposed to my wife. I pointed to it and said “let’s sit in the shade of this tree and catch our breath.” When we were settling down for our break a broken tree branch tore open my wife’s bag. I quickly tried to patch the hole, as I didn’t want to lose anything on the hike. We sat there looking into the river for some time, when my exhaustion took over and I feel into a light sleep under the shade of that tree. When I opened my eyes I saw my wife next to me then I quickly looked at my watch. The sun was lower and over an hour had passed. Before we continued I took a long look in the clear water of the river, and noticed something. There was a strange rusty red tint to the water near the edge.

The hour was late so we had to move faster to complete our journey. The sunlight was now casting long shadows of the trees causing me to question the trail at times. The forest was becoming denser the deeper we got. The uneasy feeling was growing in me almost like being watched. There was no time to rest. Our haste was causing the birds to rise out of the trees and small wildlife to leave their dark hiding places under the leaves. We had walked miles and the rusty tint was still in the water, I was beginning to get worried, questioning my decision to walk next to the river. What would it mean at the end of this long walk?

The further we walked I started to feel like there was someone behind me watching. I said to my wife, “We need to pick up the pace!” We had already been moving fairly quickly but now we were almost at a run. As we hurried along I started to wonder “What was hiding in the dark behind us?” There was no sound and I couldn’t see movement whenever I turned around. I could feel it, feel it bearing down on me. We just kept moving. The day had started with the sun shining and the birds singing now all I could feel was the dark closing in around. This was close to carrying a weight with me. I didn’t know what to do. The hike had taken me nearly all day; I was tired and hot, hadn’t stopped for water in miles. I stumbled and fell to knees to catch my breath. I looked up and realized this was it, this was the spot. I could leave this weight right here, no more feeling that burden.

The sun was going down as my shovel pierced the earth where what was left of my wife would lay. With that I started my long walk back through the woods along the clear cold river. NB

Edited by EB

Monday, April 27, 2020

The Monster Had Her


 Introduction
This short story is inspired by one of, if not, THE scariest memories I have. My daughters longest febrile seizure, the longest six minutes of my life.

1.
This bitter winter day started like any other, wake up, eat and then spend the rest of the day together. The main difference in today is that there was sadness hanging over my sweet little girl, no one could figure out why she was under these clouds. Surprisingly, and maybe in spite of them, she was in good spirits and smiling. If you looked close enough you could see this sadness was wearing on her as I held her close, but she was putting up a good fight.  
It was cold outside and my sweet girl had a fever so we were in my room under the covers to stay warm because she had aches from the looming sadness. I told her how much I loved her and that I would always be there to protect her and take care of her. I made sure to do what I could to keep her smiling and warm. I read her some stories and we looked at the pictures in hopes of not letting this sadness control us as it had tried so many times before.
As we snuggled and she kept herself safe in my arms, I could hear the cold wind blowing and its sharp cold claws try to reach through the window. This is when I noticed the shadow walk through the door. It looked like a man but there was something wrong, I could see though him. I sat quiet in hopes he couldn’t see us, my sweet girl was sleeping. He turned to leave and she moved, with that he turned his head. The sound that came out was hoarse and almost a whisper. He said “there you are, I almost thought I came here for nothing.” I tried to ask him what he meant but it was like he couldn’t hear me. “I am here to take you to the unending sadness”
This thing slowly reached for my sweet girl. I screamed at him. As his hand moved closer she started to shake. The first shake was like a shudder caused by a chill as if he only had a cold hand. The closer he got to her, her shaking became more violent. I felt powerless, unable to move. I had been able to ward off all other forms of attack and sickness on her little body but the time she really needed me I was frozen. The only thing I could think to do was to hold tight to her as she shook. There was nothing at all that could make me let go, no fear or darkness or some stupid fucking shadow. This went on for so long it seemed, locked in a battle for my sweet girl.
The shadow would scream as I fought as it was making his task of taking of her difficult. He would pull and she would shake violently while I held her close. I was determined to stay calm within myself in this moment though my heart was pounding and there were tears running down my face, she deserved that much. I still don’t know if he was aware of me at this point but I was yelling. And then my strength started to give like there was no effort to me holding on to her, at that moment she went limp. The monster had her!
I sat holding her limp body for what seemed like hours weeping, I had lost. As I looked up I noticed he was still there but no sign of my sweet girl. His face slowly formed a smile, his teeth were yellow, and his eyes red. He looked happy. What had happened?  Where had she gone? What had I done? The questions just flooded my mind, my head was pounding. I looked up at him, looked him straight in the eyes, and it felt like I went into whatever dimension he was in and I screamed.
YOU CAN’T FUCKING HAVE HER!!!

With that I was thrown into the wall and I fell crumpled on the floor.
I was pulled out of my daze by my sweet girl’s voice asking me to read her another book.
            I swore in that moment if he ever came back I would rip him apart.


NB

Sunday, April 26, 2020

Welcome To My Attic

Hello,
This will be a place for my thoughts and stories. I am not sure yet about how quickly I will post as this is just the start. I currently have several stories I am working on, as well as ideas almost daily. I am a huge fan of horror literature and a good twisted mystery, this is much of what influences my writing. Most of my stories will have a mystery and/or horror element to them. I always appreciate input as long as its constructive and not insulting.

Thanks for reading.

NB